Silent Nights/ Ruhige Nächte/ Noches Silenciosasa

Insomnia fails 
Shadows spread and dance
In silent nights
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Keine Schlaflosigkeit
Schatten breiten sich aus, tanzen
In stillen Nächten
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Insomnio falla 
Sombras extienden, bailan
En noches silenciosas
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Falotico Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 5:51 AM
Another Gem from the Haiku master...Michael
Chu Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 11:03 AM
"insomnia fails" very short and concise way of expressing sleepiness. I like how you kept it in the moment. Nice haiku.
Neels Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 9:25 AM
Hey Gert, jou gedig herinner my aan myself.. Het jou e pos gekry, sal jou later mail ne :) hoop jou dag was 'n lekker een! Geniet jou Sondag :) Wilma
Kendrick Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 3:42 AM
Terrible to have a problem with insomnia for sure...Of course, it opens the door to writing in the still and quiet of the night when all quiet things speak to us..Enjoyed reading of your work..You blessed my morn by stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
Dietrich Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 11:20 PM
well,it is wonderful when insomnia fails. And the shadows can spread and dance! awesome, Gert. Luv,Andrea
A  Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 5:58 PM
SOUNDS LIKE MYSELF LAST WEEK. ENJOYED YOUR POEM....ALWAYS WITH THE RIGHT FEELING TO ALL YOUR HAIKUS. ENJOYED~luv*SKAT
Devonshire Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 2:20 PM
Quite a bewitching poem, Gert. I love the way the "Shadows spread and dance." Insomnia never fails me, though, I stay awake most nights. Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 1:25 PM
Interesting approach you have on insomnia here, Gert --and totally can see those shadows dancing-- maraming salamat po pala sa lahat ny iyong mga magandang komento, at mabuti naman na ikaw ay nakapagsulat din dito ;) (thank you very much for all your beautiful comments, and it's very good that you are also able to write here) have a great weekend! ingat! - nikko :)
Roberts Avatar
September 10, 2010 at 8:51 AM
beautiful as always Gert, much enjoyed
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