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It was late at night, and everything was dead quiet. Only in the unruly city Did people create a riot. On the side, straw was scattered; A baby pika crawled in. His stomach rumbled; He was on a forced diet. All around was silence, But he hid in some straw. Two shivering people crawled in. The baby pika looked in awe. Still, the night was silent. As the woman lay down. She emptied her things, A swaddling cloth and a gown. Soon, she was to give birth. The baby pika groaned in despair. The babe was born, The cow shed was filled with celestial light. Heavenly music filled the manger, Angels flew above in adoration. Hail, the Saviour, was born For everyone of any nation. Even the baby pika felt elated, And wondered what he should do. As shepherds came to adore, The baby pika just joined the queue.

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Date: 12/4/2024 5:51:00 AM
The baby Pika reverently joins the queue with the shepherds to honor and adore the Christ Child. What a breathtaking write and how perfectly you describe the sequence of events on that special Christmas Eve night. Thank you for sharing my dear friend. Blessings Jennifer. CONGRATULATIONS GALORE for your inclusion in Poetry Soup's newest Anthology - Radiant Verses.
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Date: 12/3/2024 3:42:00 AM
Joseph and Mary must have been traveling a long distance in the cold weather looking for a shelter. So, they were shivering and the baby pika was the first to behold the baby in the manger. The Christmas story is given a new dimension by introducing the baby pika. Have a happy Christmas season dear Victor.
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Date: 12/2/2024 8:29:00 AM
- Heavenly beautiful little story, Victor :) - Thanks for a very nice post - I haven't got the Christmas spirit yet :) - hugs
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Date: 12/2/2024 8:17:00 AM
Beautiful story, Victor. I enjoyed the view of the baby pika. Blessings my friend
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Date: 12/1/2024 11:10:00 PM
You have woven such an intriguing story around the baby pika and connected it with the birth of Christ - Lol - The baby pika just joined the queue' Loved it. Hugs Maria
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Date: 12/1/2024 9:44:00 PM
Dear Victor, i remember seeing somewhere a pika, which is a bit cute and stuff, and you’ve written a very descriptive poem as always on silent night, in such an engaging manner which you tend to always do. I especially loved the lines “All around was silence, But he hid in some straw. Two shivering people crawled in. The baby pika looked in awe.” Such vivid imagery! Well delivered! Pleasure always reading your work. Sending you light always
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Date: 12/1/2024 8:21:00 PM
I enjoyed the part where angels flew up above in adoration!
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Date: 12/1/2024 12:20:00 PM
Awe adding a baby pika to the Advent story! That's cool! Merry Christmas to you as this is 24 (because the day is mostly over) days away today.
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Date: 12/1/2024 10:49:00 AM
This shows was a creative and clever storyteller you are ..
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Date: 12/1/2024 10:21:00 AM
Hi Victor, your silent night depicts the true meaning of Christmas.
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Date: 12/1/2024 9:19:00 AM
Lovely writing - love that pika :)
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Date: 12/1/2024 9:06:00 AM
Love your modern twist on the nativity Victor, can't believe Christmas is on us once more.
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Date: 12/1/2024 9:06:00 AM
So nice to read your beautiful Christmas story this morning, Victor. I enjoyed it thoroughly, down to the wonderful rhyming. :)
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Date: 12/1/2024 8:42:00 AM
i had to google what a pika was Victor! love your unique take on the nativity story:-) hugs jan xx
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