Silent Love

SILENT LOVE

she took my heart she didn't know
 
I and my heart became her prisoner she didn't know 

I loved her with all my heart and my soul she didn't know 

I watched her passing by day by day she didn't know
 
I spoke to her every day she didn't know 

I  touched her face and wiped her tears she didn't know

I felt her happiness and sadness she didn't know
 
I cried and grieved for long time she didn't know 

I watched her crashing my heart she didn't know 

I guess she was blind she didn't know 

I walked a way and left behind a wounded heart she didn't know

I wished  her the best of the best  that how much I care but yet she didn't know 

I said goodbye still she didn't know 

BY 
Hakeem Omer

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 9/7/2013 10:31:00 AM
You remained silent and she didn't know, too bad she didn't know.
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Date: 7/18/2012 6:12:00 AM
you didn't tell her, communication is one of the keys to great relationships,nice write Hakeem
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Date: 7/18/2012 6:19:00 AM
you are right i didn't tell ,because some time our dreams are way ahead of us . its very hard to reach . thank you for you kind comment Hakeem omer
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