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silent lighthouse hiku

silent lighthouse hiku For Brian Strand's Your Choice W Poetry Contest 8 June 2025 a watchful sentry \ * / \ \ ^ / / \ / \ / \ / _____ \ / ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ~o~o~o~o~=== >>>> piercing through ——————— the dense, fierce fog, \______________/ ~o~o~o~o~=== / / / ! ! ! \ \ \ \ / ! ! ! ! ————————— ! ! ! ! ————————— ! ! ! ! ———————————— ! ! ! ! ——————————————— ___H_____ ! ! ~~~~~~~~~~~ \_\______/ ! ! _____________ ~~~~ships steered —————————— safe to shore. 1st Prize Winner

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Date: 6/10/2025 4:42:00 AM
Nice design!
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Date: 6/10/2025 1:38:00 AM
Wow,,haha, nice one, brother Bernard!! Congratulations. ^___^JCB
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/10/2025 3:50:00 AM
Thanks, Sister JCB. I edited it so many times hehe. Because after submitting the piece, the image was ruined. I had to reconstruct it again and again <->
Date: 6/9/2025 10:59:00 PM
Your hard work paid off. Congrats
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/9/2025 11:58:00 PM
I'm happy for the win, Ma'am Rea. I also congratulate you for your prized work.
Date: 6/8/2025 1:59:00 PM
So cool that you can make a shape like this. It looks very difficult.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 6/9/2025 12:43:00 AM
It's difficult indeed. But I enjoy challenges. I also love your creativity in your works. You really inspire me, Ma'am Rea.

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