Silent Kiss

Eyes watch another
Mouths move in on one last wish
Shhh...a silent kiss
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Rhinem Avatar
August 6, 2010 at 7:36 PM
~ "Excellent Image; Wonderful Thought; Beautiful Dreams" ~ "My Love & Warmth As Always, Wrapped Into Smiles & Hugs," John! ~ "You Have The Most Beautiful of Evenings & Tomorrows Dear, Lovely Jessica Arteaga;" Bye Precious Lady!:) ~
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August 6, 2010 at 7:32 PM
~ I would say that that would definately be an attribute of poetess within "Your Treasures" case of, being able to reach into the corridores of "Your Priceless Soul" and traverse its rising from upon, the canvas of "Your Hearts Paintings" and into, "Your" readers own souls and hearts; very beautifully unique!! ~ Smile, and "The Silent Kiss" this, would fall right into that stream I believe ~ ....Cont:)
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August 6, 2010 at 7:25 PM
Smile ~ "Eyes watch another - Mouths move on one last wish - Shhh...a silent kiss." ~ "Yes," this is so much more pleasant of a thought I do believe than, "Your Beautifully Bittersweet" first write this night! ~ You know "Precious & Lovely Jessica Arteaga," within the short bit of time that I have know "Your Radiance Dear," I have somehow felt "Your Soul" and, it is Always so wonderful when one does so ~ ....Cont:)
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August 5, 2010 at 8:15 PM
Pretty sneaky,, a very intriguing kiss, enjoyed your Haiku,..p..d
Hill Avatar
August 5, 2010 at 11:40 AM
well done....TAH
Horsman Avatar
August 4, 2010 at 1:15 AM
Oh! this is so wonderful, so much in such a short form of poetry. Awesome. Harry
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