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Silent Kiss

Eyes watch another Mouths move in on one last wish Shhh...a silent kiss

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John Rhinem

Date: 8/6/2010 7:36:00 PM

~ "Excellent Image; Wonderful Thought; Beautiful Dreams" ~ "My Love & Warmth As Always, Wrapped Into Smiles & Hugs," John! ~ "You Have The Most Beautiful of Evenings & Tomorrows Dear, Lovely Jessica Arteaga;" Bye Precious Lady!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 8/6/2010 7:32:00 PM

~ I would say that that would definately be an attribute of poetess within "Your Treasures" case of, being able to reach into the corridores of "Your Priceless Soul" and traverse its rising from upon, the canvas of "Your Hearts Paintings" and into, "Your" readers own souls and hearts; very beautifully unique!! ~ Smile, and "The Silent Kiss" this, would fall right into that stream I believe ~ ....Cont:)

John Rhinem

Date: 8/6/2010 7:25:00 PM

Smile ~ "Eyes watch another - Mouths move on one last wish - Shhh...a silent kiss." ~ "Yes," this is so much more pleasant of a thought I do believe than, "Your Beautifully Bittersweet" first write this night! ~ You know "Precious & Lovely Jessica Arteaga," within the short bit of time that I have know "Your Radiance Dear," I have somehow felt "Your Soul" and, it is Always so wonderful when one does so ~ ....Cont:)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/5/2010 8:15:00 PM

Pretty sneaky,, a very intriguing kiss, enjoyed your Haiku,..p..d

Tobey Hill

Date: 8/5/2010 11:40:00 AM

well done....TAH

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/4/2010 1:15:00 AM

Oh! this is so wonderful, so much in such a short form of poetry. Awesome. Harry