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Silent Fall

autumn rains leaves on path
shrouds lanes in aftermath

game is played on rope swings
love is swayed, fallout brings

swing falls silent, regrets
leaf palls its shed, forgets
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Roper Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 7:25 PM
Great imagery and rhyme , John , congratulations in your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve
Sambourne Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 11:22 AM
Excellent write, John. Strong images in just a few short lines. Congratulations! Brian
Anderson Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 12:32 PM
Thanks very much Brian. Nice to hear from you. Cheers and Best Wishes
Canerdy Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 6:06 AM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, John. Janice
Anderson Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 10:58 AM
Wow thanks very much
May Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 5:55 AM
Very nicely rendered John, Congrats on your win
Anderson Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 10:59 AM
Greatly appreciated - thanks
Robinson Jr. Avatar
August 14, 2021 at 3:42 AM
Very picturesque poetry, John! Prescient title to match mood of ink. Love and more love always.
Anderson Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 10:59 AM
Thanks for your kind words, Best Wishes
Alex Avatar
August 11, 2021 at 4:52 AM
Beautiful Verses. Congratulations on your win!
Anderson Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 11:00 AM
Cheers and Best Wishes
Mcintosh Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 3:31 PM
This is wonderful, I hope you win. Love it. God bless you... Fall is my favorite season. Love, Gina
Anderson Avatar
August 10, 2021 at 4:05 PM
Thanks very much for your king words. Cheers
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