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autumn rains leaves on path shrouds lanes in aftermath game is played on rope swings love is swayed, fallout brings swing falls silent, regrets leaf palls its shed, forgets

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Date: 8/28/2021 7:25:00 PM
Great imagery and rhyme , John , congratulations in your win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/28/2021 11:22:00 AM
Excellent write, John. Strong images in just a few short lines. Congratulations! Brian
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John Anderson
Date: 8/28/2021 12:32:00 PM
Thanks very much Brian. Nice to hear from you. Cheers and Best Wishes
Date: 8/28/2021 6:06:00 AM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, John. Janice
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John Anderson
Date: 8/28/2021 10:58:00 AM
Wow thanks very much
Date: 8/28/2021 5:55:00 AM
Very nicely rendered John, Congrats on your win
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John Anderson
Date: 8/28/2021 10:59:00 AM
Greatly appreciated - thanks
Date: 8/14/2021 3:42:00 AM
Very picturesque poetry, John! Prescient title to match mood of ink. Love and more love always.
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John Anderson
Date: 8/28/2021 10:59:00 AM
Thanks for your kind words, Best Wishes
Date: 8/11/2021 4:52:00 AM
Beautiful Verses. Congratulations on your win!
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John Anderson
Date: 8/28/2021 11:00:00 AM
Cheers and Best Wishes
Date: 8/10/2021 3:31:00 PM
This is wonderful, I hope you win. Love it. God bless you... Fall is my favorite season. Love, Gina
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John Anderson
Date: 8/10/2021 4:05:00 PM
Thanks very much for your king words. Cheers

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