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Who can view me behind the fence ferrous! Those infiltrating eyes bear me desirous! Unveiling what was previously hidden. Keeping this same watcher has striven. I figure you should say, "What's in plain view!" Penny for your ideas as they decay in a dark row. Truth is a precursor to the hotly slated freedom. The spilling from torn gum is giving a storm! Am I a true enchanter worthy of notice? I feel you crying, so please, let me focus. I never set up in front of an audience. I starve to escape the irritating sequence. But does it work to retain me from leaving?  This clutter adds to the overall styling.  Do they have any considerable difference? Do I cave in, or do I dazzle with my openness? What has me scared! How am I striving to hide? None, however, can bear reality inside. After the Inquest, I cast the net vast and bleak. Induce them all to cave up the skill to peek!
Written: October 3, 2021

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Date: 10/6/2021 5:52:00 AM
Hiding behind an iron fence will not spare your protagonist he can still feel fear..Delice.
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Date: 10/4/2021 2:22:00 AM
Profound writing, my dear friend, Lasaad! Thank you!
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Date: 10/4/2021 1:38:00 AM
A deep poem. One must delve to understand the soul.
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Date: 10/3/2021 2:48:00 PM
Endearing thoughts from silence of mind and heart, Lasaad.
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Date: 10/3/2021 1:39:00 PM
Lots to ponder over in your verse Lasaad. Hope you've had a lovely weekend. Tom
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