Silencing Love

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"SILENCING LOVE" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 12 AUGUST 2017, MY PHOTO,©

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Envious Muta* sealed the lips of the beloved with a kiss silencing thus clamant love! © Demetrios Trifiatis 12 August 2017 *Muta: Roman deity personifying silence!

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Maria Williams

Date: 8/14/2017 6:37:00 AM

A kiss will always satisfy the yearning of a clamant love, Dearest Demetrios...Maria xx

Akkina Downing

Date: 8/12/2017 9:49:00 AM

I love it :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/12/2017 8:38:00 AM

- Envious Muta, know what he's doing - Excellent, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Michael Tor

Date: 8/12/2017 6:49:00 AM

Humorous piece Demetrios. Poor Muta being jealous and reacting with retribution. Clever thought and humor my friend.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2017 7:17:00 AM

Well, my friend, Michael there are different ways for someone to read a poem! Thank you for your visit my good friend! God bless you!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/12/2017 5:52:00 AM

Good way to silence love--well done!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2017 5:58:00 AM

I think it is dear, Vijay! Thank you my dear friend for your kind visit!

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/12/2017 4:01:00 AM

I believe that this kind of silence, that with a kiss, is certainly a great way to show your love towards your spouse! What a fabulous write my friend! I like how you included Muta in the poem, very clever indeed! Isn't she the one who shows true love through silence? Such a beautiful poem Demetrios! What a grand Monoku, again with your marvelous skill you paint this glorious piece, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 8/12/2017 5:57:00 AM

Wonderful analysis and comment dear friend, Russell! A pleasure to read! Thank you for your contribution!