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"SILENCING LOVE" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN, 12 AUGUST 2017, MY PHOTO,©

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Silencing Love

Envious Muta* sealed the lips of the beloved with a kiss silencing thus clamant love!








© Demetrios Trifiatis
       12 August 2017





*Muta: Roman deity personifying silence!
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Williams Avatar
August 14, 2017 at 6:37 AM
A kiss will always satisfy the yearning of a clamant love, Dearest Demetrios...Maria xx
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August 12, 2017 at 9:49 AM
I love it :)
Andresen Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 8:38 AM
- Envious Muta, know what he's doing - Excellent, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Tor Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 6:49 AM
Humorous piece Demetrios. Poor Muta being jealous and reacting with retribution. Clever thought and humor my friend.
Trifiatis Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 7:17 AM
Well, my friend, Michael there are different ways for someone to read a poem! Thank you for your visit my good friend! God bless you!
Pandit Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 5:52 AM
Good way to silence love--well done!
Trifiatis Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 5:58 AM
I think it is dear, Vijay! Thank you my dear friend for your kind visit!
Sivey Avatar
August 12, 2017 at 4:01 AM
I believe that this kind of silence, that with a kiss, is certainly a great way to show your love towards your spouse! What a fabulous write my friend! I like how you included Muta in the poem, very clever indeed! Isn't she the one who shows true love through silence? Such a beautiful poem Demetrios! What a grand Monoku, again with your marvelous skill you paint this glorious piece, Great Work!!
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August 12, 2017 at 5:57 AM
Wonderful analysis and comment dear friend, Russell! A pleasure to read! Thank you for your contribution!
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