Caren Krutsinger Poet Diamante

Silence Or Loudness

silence
                                    peaceful meditative
                              resting slumbering thinking
                              nap meditation scream wail
                             banging clanging threatening
                                     invasive startling
                                           loudness

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Andrea Dietrich June 28, 2019 at 12:38 PM Great job. Was this one in the contest? Caren Krutsinger June 28, 2019 at 6:35 PM No, I did it for fun.

Sandra Adams June 28, 2019 at 6:51 AM nice transition from silence to loudness, not always easy to make them so smooth, good diamante :) hugs Caren Krutsinger June 28, 2019 at 6:35 PM Thank you Sandra. I jotted down what I wanted to say and there it was.