Silence

Silence.... It tells a story..... It shows emotion..... boredom..... anger...... Discomfort...... The story of a girl.... she wasn't excepted..... her parents...... her family..... her peers..... no one ........ except one thing..... Silence..... It calmed her...... No ridicule from people...... Even though there was no love..... It was better then a world of hate..... others hatred...... the judging...... the name calling...... The abuse ....... It hurt but when it was silent....... The world faded....... she read....... She wrote........ She sang....... silence was her savior....... silence was her bliss........ silence is bliss.......

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Skat A

Date: 5/25/2013 10:57:00 AM

Hi Cassidy, this was cool to read. , your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"

Kim Van Breda

Date: 5/13/2013 6:07:00 AM

WOW what a powerful write and well illustrated collection of words dealing with a topic I think most of us 'creative' writers/musicians/poets experience. I am just the same-- a far prefer my own company to the pretences and sarcasm of some people. Read my poem "Perfect Isolation"--

Ellinor Sador

Date: 5/13/2013 2:57:00 AM

Excellent!

Cassidy Martin

Date: 5/12/2013 1:59:00 PM

It was an assignment for school and I thought it turned out really well :) enjoy :)