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Silence

Silence slowly sinks in and it begins to drown drown me in emptiness with only the echoes left pulling me down, echoes of that yesterday when you slammed the door and I was caught on the other side left staring at the floor. Left in the empty rooms rooms of sweet tomorrows I shall never see again, and all these tomorrows are yesterdays and bitter what should have been. Silence slowly covers the tears that had there fell leaving only the stains of that moment to mark the descent of heaven to hell.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/30/2009 2:53:00 AM
I loved the poem and the emotions that poor from the verses. I especially love the last stanza. A. W. Nutter www.freewebs.com/abcedit
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Date: 9/16/2009 2:56:00 PM
very powerful poetry...grrth
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Date: 9/15/2009 11:44:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your heart with us in your excellent poetry today Madison. Love, Carol
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