Michael Dom Poet Sijo

Sijo For Tawa

My Tawa, remember me, and recall that first sweet bloom
Of flowers in a garden, where my strong arms once carried you.
T’was your smile, lifting my weak heart, taught me to love another.

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Jake Ponce May 13, 2014 at 6:55 PM Congratulations, too, Michael! Your Sijo is moving. :)

Poet Destroyer A April 12, 2014 at 9:42 PM Michael ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA Michael Dom April 15, 2014 at 5:41 AM Cheers&thanks Linda.

Richard Lamoureux April 9, 2014 at 9:51 AM This is very moving, congratulations. Michael Dom April 10, 2014 at 1:03 AM :-) thank you Richard.

Dr.Ram Mehta April 9, 2014 at 9:35 AM A wonderful poem, congrats on the win, michael Michael Dom April 10, 2014 at 1:02 AM Ram, thanks for your visit. Cheers.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma April 9, 2014 at 9:04 AM Michael this is a great poem here ! Congrats on ur win ! Michael Dom April 10, 2014 at 1:02 AM Upma, thanks for your high praise.

Poet Destroyer A April 9, 2014 at 3:37 AM Hi Michael, thank you so much for the support... Linda Michael Dom April 10, 2014 at 1:01 AM Linda, :-) thank you for your contest and your consideration. Cheers, Glory!

Verlena S. Walker April 9, 2014 at 3:07 AM Congratulations on your win in the contest Michael. Verlena Michael Dom April 10, 2014 at 12:59 AM Thanks&cheers

Dr.Ram Mehta April 7, 2014 at 5:15 AM A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week , michael Michael Dom April 7, 2014 at 9:25 PM It's very cool. Cheers&thanks

John Pen April 1, 2014 at 3:29 AM With a little love the world would be a better place Michael Dom April 1, 2014 at 11:01 PM Agreed. Thank you for your visit John Pen.

Paul Callus March 31, 2014 at 3:02 PM What elegance in this write! and what emotion! I give it a high rating :) // paul Michael Dom March 31, 2014 at 6:53 PM I'm honored Paul. Thank you.

Carrie Richards March 31, 2014 at 10:09 AM Goodness, such a tender poem to read first thing this morning. I love this gentle lesson of one's life. Lovely ! Michael Dom March 31, 2014 at 6:53 PM Hwy Carrie, glad to have made your morning reading a pleasant start to the day.. Cheers&Thanks

Andrea Dietrich March 30, 2014 at 11:08 AM wow, this is GOOD. I sure enjoyed this sweet poem. Michael Dom March 31, 2014 at 2:26 AM Hi Andrea, thanks for the capitals!