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Sijo for Tawa

My Tawa, remember me, and recall that first sweet bloom
Of flowers in a garden, where my strong arms once carried you.
T’was your smile, lifting my weak heart, taught me to love another.

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Jake Ponce

Date: 5/13/2014 6:55:00 PM

Congratulations, too, Michael! Your Sijo is moving. :)

The LYRIC

Date: 4/13/2014 10:44:00 PM

Well done.. congrats on your win!

Michael Dom
Date: 4/15/2014 5:42:00 AM

Hi Dave, thanks for stopping by. Cheers.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/12/2014 9:42:00 PM

Michael ... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. <3 =LINDA

Michael Dom
Date: 4/15/2014 5:41:00 AM

Cheers&thanks Linda.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 4/9/2014 9:51:00 AM

This is very moving, congratulations.

Michael Dom
Date: 4/10/2014 1:03:00 AM

:-) thank you Richard.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/9/2014 9:35:00 AM

A wonderful poem, congrats on the win, michael

Michael Dom
Date: 4/10/2014 1:02:00 AM

Ram, thanks for your visit. Cheers.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/9/2014 9:04:00 AM

Michael this is a great poem here ! Congrats on ur win !

Michael Dom
Date: 4/10/2014 1:02:00 AM

Upma, thanks for your high praise.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/9/2014 3:37:00 AM

Hi Michael, thank you so much for the support... Linda

Michael Dom
Date: 4/10/2014 1:01:00 AM

Linda, :-) thank you for your contest and your consideration. Cheers, Glory!

Verlena S. Walker

Date: 4/9/2014 3:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the contest Michael. Verlena

Michael Dom
Date: 4/10/2014 12:59:00 AM

Thanks&cheers

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/7/2014 5:15:00 AM

A brilliant write. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week , michael

Michael Dom
Date: 4/7/2014 9:25:00 PM

It's very cool. Cheers&thanks

John Pen

Date: 4/1/2014 3:29:00 AM

With a little love the world would be a better place

Michael Dom
Date: 4/1/2014 11:01:00 PM

Agreed. Thank you for your visit John Pen.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/31/2014 3:02:00 PM

What elegance in this write! and what emotion! I give it a high rating :) // paul

Michael Dom
Date: 3/31/2014 6:53:00 PM

I'm honored Paul. Thank you.

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/31/2014 10:09:00 AM

Goodness, such a tender poem to read first thing this morning. I love this gentle lesson of one's life. Lovely !

Michael Dom
Date: 3/31/2014 6:53:00 PM

Hwy Carrie, glad to have made your morning reading a pleasant start to the day.. Cheers&Thanks

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/30/2014 11:08:00 AM

wow, this is GOOD. I sure enjoyed this sweet poem.

Michael Dom
Date: 3/31/2014 2:26:00 AM

Hi Andrea, thanks for the capitals!