Sijo Ballet

Ladies upon a stage which are dressed in feminine style
Gracefully in a row, they flow as a troupe dancing the ballet
I am sure those ladies had many ingrown toenails and cramps.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Kendrick Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 3:52 PM
Great one..Got a chuckle..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Sara
Richards Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 8:02 AM
That last line was too familiar to my own reality!!....yep!!! But it sure makes me laugh!! Good one!!
Brown Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 5:33 AM
Enjoyed reading this exceptional piece of poetry this morning Cecil. Thank you for sharing it. The best to you if for the contest. Love, Carol
Onclaud Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 4:05 AM
the pang of rigorous exercises, cecil... very smart! best winning wishes! :) huggs, nette
Horsman Avatar
March 30, 2011 at 12:41 AM
Yes i'm sure they did, cecil, love the humour. Harry
Dietrich Avatar
March 29, 2011 at 11:12 PM
hahaha, good way to end it humorously, Cecil. I gotta hurry and post mine!
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