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Sijo: A New Coat of Paint

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Poetic Form: Sijo
Inspired: 2024 January 28
Image: American Flag by Esty

 
Pallet Flag Rustic Reclaimed Wood Pallet American Flag - Etsy
A crawling held a walled frame as passer-by beheld too A football helmet and high school pennant encased against a wall Tapestry of day shades painted wall of ledged held rolled flag.

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Date: 1/28/2024 2:54:00 PM
I've written only on Sijo...but I like what you've done with yours....have a great evening, Sara
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Date: 1/28/2024 3:26:00 PM
Syllable count is up to par, I'm lost in translation to the rest, c'est la vie mon cherie, Sara. Aloha, William

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