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Sijo:

We have moved mountains and dug deep into this earth to find gold

To exchange for paper notes, while burying our brothers in filth.

We call development the trenches dug between us for wealth.

Copyright © Michael Dom | Year Posted 2013

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Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/19/2014 12:08:00 AM I am with Vie, Mystic rose. This sends a very strong message indeed!! Login to Reply Michael Dom Date: 4/20/2014 10:14:00 PM Hey Andrea and Mystic, thanks for coming back to this sijo. Honesty in the message makes it powerful, I'm just the messenger. :-)

Poet Tacito Date: 7/15/2013 10:46:00 AM Good to meet you! This is an insanely strong piece. Hell of a message here! Login to Reply Michael Dom Date: 7/16/2013 1:23:00 AM I appreciate your visit Drake and I'm glad you like the message.

Charmaine Chircop Date: 7/13/2013 12:38:00 AM A profound sijo.Well said Michael-Charma Login to Reply Michael Dom Date: 7/14/2013 5:52:00 PM Hi Charma, thank you for appreciating this piece. After visiting your page I can see I have lots of good reading to look forward to. Cheers!

Yanny Widjanarko Date: 7/11/2013 8:52:00 PM Wow, this is a deep silo Mike, and also agree it as a powerful statement too :D thank you for the visit before Mike, enjoyed to read this too in my morning :D hug, Yanny Login to Reply Michael Dom Date: 7/14/2013 5:50:00 PM :-) hug you too, yanny, thanks for coming over.