Andrew Crisci Poet Lanterne

Signs of Fall

Sky
too tense
and furtive;
a storm forming:
clouds...


Trees
stooping,
to reach grass;
loudly cracking:
trunks...


Sea
pounding 
the frail boats
that fight wild surfs:
waves...


Gulls
and geese 
flee from sky
to earth below:
wings...



Mind
distant
and pensive;
bored by notions:   
thougths...


Entered in Brian's Strand " Light My Fire"  lanterne contest

Copyright 2009 by Andrew crisci

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

July 13, 2009 at 3:12 PM Nice use of imagery in this lanterne series. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Brian's contest. Enjoy your honor. Keep on writing! Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown July 13, 2009 at 2:29 PM Andrew, congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. Love, Carol

Carrie Richards July 13, 2009 at 7:28 AM Wonderful and beautiful Lanterne! Congratulations on this winning entry!!

Raul Moreno July 13, 2009 at 1:27 AM Andrew, congrats on your success in Brian's contest...Raul

Brian Strand July 13, 2009 at 1:09 AM Congrats on your success in my contest Andrew .Rgds Brian My latest contest Motto is now open

Brian Strand July 7, 2009 at 6:18 AM Thank you for supporting my contest Andrew.Rgds Brian