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Sign of a Goddess

My jaw dropped and my eyes ventured perfection Nomadically discovering forbidden curves and a taste-worthy complexion Heels highlighting slenderized yet voluptuous thighs A gentle profoundness defined within the iris of her eyes This truly would be a Greek tragedy if I let this goddess get away Thoughts play hopscotch with varied selections of what to say By chance her eyes took an interesting glance A sign!!! It’s safe to say she’s gonna be mine All I needed was a sign

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Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/2/2009 6:42:00 AM

LOVE THIS!

L'Nass Shango

Date: 3/18/2009 9:59:00 AM

I love the: A sign!!! a powerful gasp came through to validate continuity. Peace and love

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 2/25/2009 4:16:00 PM

And A sign I hope you got, someones smitten here! Great Write! Laura :)

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/25/2009 8:07:00 AM

I really like it. I can see it now if I could smell it???? Don't forget the rest of your sensory repertoire. I want to move up "A sign" since the rest of the lines are grouped in couplets. And perhaps just for emphasis, separate the last line the finale. PS I am so happy you like my writes yet you have my encouragement to critique!!! Pleaseeee! PSSS see me on my knees, a chair poem for the Contest Please? Light & Love Debbie

Christopher Higgins

Date: 2/25/2009 4:10:00 AM

Love this brother.. A lot of cool writes throughout the piece..I love the hpscotch line ..sweet...the opening was done very well. really cool write.

Belinda Parish

Date: 2/24/2009 11:29:00 PM

Hmm, got your eye on a Goddess huh? What can I say...go for it! good imagery and write James.