James Faulkner Poet Rhyme

Sign of a Goddess

My jaw dropped and my eyes ventured perfection 
Nomadically discovering forbidden curves and a taste-worthy complexion
Heels highlighting slenderized yet voluptuous thighs 
A gentle profoundness defined within the iris of her eyes
This truly would be a Greek tragedy if I let this goddess get away
Thoughts play hopscotch with varied selections of what to say
By chance her eyes took an interesting glance
A sign!!!
It’s safe to say she’s gonna be mine
All I needed was a sign

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Izzy Gumbo May 2, 2009 at 6:42 AM LOVE THIS!

L'Nass Shango March 18, 2009 at 9:59 AM I love the: A sign!!! a powerful gasp came through to validate continuity. Peace and love

Laura Mckenzie February 25, 2009 at 4:16 PM And A sign I hope you got, someones smitten here! Great Write! Laura :)

Debbie Guzzi February 25, 2009 at 8:07 AM I really like it. I can see it now if I could smell it???? Don't forget the rest of your sensory repertoire. I want to move up "A sign" since the rest of the lines are grouped in couplets. And perhaps just for emphasis, separate the last line the finale. PS I am so happy you like my writes yet you have my encouragement to critique!!! Pleaseeee! PSSS see me on my knees, a chair poem for the Contest Please? Light & Love Debbie

Christopher Higgins February 25, 2009 at 4:10 AM Love this brother.. A lot of cool writes throughout the piece..I love the hpscotch line ..sweet...the opening was done very well. really cool write.

Belinda Parish February 24, 2009 at 11:29 PM Hmm, got your eye on a Goddess huh? What can I say...go for it! good imagery and write James.