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Sight To Behold

I was made For war. She let her Sugar pour. She was made For peace. I fought with The police. I have a head Full of bad ideas. She is making home Made tortillas. I'm a work In project. She is a Desired object. I have too Much to say. She is a Quiet day. I easily Fall apart. She is smooth, State of the art. I’m full of Nervous energy. She’s a special Documentary. I’m that, Four AM call. She is the First snowfall. I’m full of Confrontation. She is a solid Foundation. I’m ready To attack. She’s easy going And relaxed. I can make A scene. She is a Living dream. I’m a ing Mess. She is hot Off the press. I seem to Know it all. She is that One free call. I’m a big Ball of worry. She is never In a hurry. There is something Wrong with me. She is perfect As can be. I run hot Then cold. She is a Sight to behold. Turbo1904

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Date: 2/20/2022 1:29:00 PM
Great write Debbie, it's a really enjoyable read indeed, and love your super rhyme too. And I like Deb think you must have many great qualities as this piece proves so looking forward to more great pen from your gifted hand. Blessings, Gordon
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Debbie Middaugh
Date: 2/21/2022 11:07:00 PM
Thank you, Gordon, I have great qualities. I was trying to bring across the opposites that we were. Being the same gender, yet opposing forces. Makes me wonder why I was attracted in the first place. Blessing Gordon, Thanks again.
Date: 2/20/2022 10:55:00 AM
There are two sides to every coin . . . .Some are attracted to the head, others much prefer the tail . . . . Aloha!
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Debbie Middaugh
Date: 2/21/2022 11:09:00 PM
Well said Rico Thanks ALOHA MY FRIEND
Date: 2/19/2022 7:02:00 PM
Hi Debbie…..a great poem which I really enjoyed. However, I do not believe you are all those negatives Debbie….I’m sure you have some wonderful qualities as well as flaws like us all. You forgot to mention you write beautiful words that are heartfelt and touching! Debxxx
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Debbie Middaugh
Date: 2/21/2022 11:12:00 PM
Hey Deb, nice hearing from you. Yes, my friend, I have many qualities. We were so opposite, being the same gender and all. Anyway, I question what the attraction was to begin with. Thank you for YOU........

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