Sight, Scent and Sound

spring snowballs in bloom 
busy bees hum drowsy tunes
school will be out soon...
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April 22, 2013 at 6:55 PM
Tim, a very sweet and lovely win :-) Congratulations in Susan's "Cherry Blossom Haiku" contest. Your poem is awesome with imagery. always & forever-LINDA
Dillard Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 10:35 PM
I enjoyed your haiku! Hope you had a wonderful trip! RAY
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
April 21, 2013 at 1:49 AM
Many congratulations Tim xx
Dietrich Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 11:27 PM
oh that is so delightful about the spring snowballs. Love it. And congrats on your win.
Guzzi Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 7:21 PM
Congrad's Light & Love
May Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 5:04 PM
congrats on your win Tim....I like the snowball line..
Collins Avatar
April 13, 2013 at 8:39 AM
I remember that ants in my pants feeling. love, Kathy
Ober Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 7:18 AM
Gorgeous haiku, Tim! I love the rhyme too ;)
Eggins Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 4:44 AM
A lovely Haiku thoroughly enjoyed the read and thank you for the kind comments on my poems they are much appreciated sincerely Jayne
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April 12, 2013 at 3:22 AM
- Hooray for school free, sunshine and spring! - Well done Tim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Mannan Avatar
April 12, 2013 at 1:45 AM
This is amazing. So melodious Tim.
Sivey Avatar
April 11, 2013 at 10:32 PM
This is a very wondrous rhyming Haiku! I loved reading this delightful poem this evening! What an enlightening piece, you've written a write that reminds me of elementary school days, ah the innocence of that time period, Awesome Work!!
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