Sigh

Sigh, it is a blur.
I breathe, that’s what I control
Patience, Sun will rise.

faithhopelifehaiku

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Farah Chamma

September 1, 2010 at 5:54 AM

Great Haiku =) Thought I'd read something you've written a while ago. Farah

Raul Moreno

May 3, 2009 at 6:51 PM

Dima, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 28, 2009 at 6:46 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

March 24, 2009 at 4:12 PM

This was posted before I became active on the site, Dima, but I wanted to check out more of your work. This is magnificent! Love, Carolyn

Michael Jordan

December 23, 2008 at 8:41 PM

D.N. - Congratulations on placing in Seashell’s contest – MERRY CHRISTMAS & God Bless, MJ

Nigel Fawcett

December 23, 2008 at 12:30 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved Win in seashell's lovely contest. Nigel

John Heck

December 22, 2008 at 11:28 PM

Dear D.N. - Congratulations on your WIN in Island's contest! Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

December 22, 2008 at 7:07 PM

Congratulations on your win in the Winter solstice contest! Well done! Love, shar

Carrie Richards

December 22, 2008 at 6:07 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem, and for placing in the contest!! ~ Happy Holidays!~Carrie

Carrie Richards

November 12, 2008 at 6:30 AM

This poem captures the moment like a deep breath! Well done!~ Carrie

Carrie Richards

November 4, 2008 at 6:15 PM

This one takes you to that place...sigh! Well done! Congratulations on being featured this week! ~ Carrie

Chitra Lakhera

November 4, 2008 at 6:53 AM

Wonderful vision. Really liked the thought of it. It gives a lot to ponder about. Congratulations on being featured. Love, Chitra

Daver Austin

November 4, 2008 at 4:18 AM

Good moment of thought. Congrats on this choice. Love, daver

November 3, 2008 at 2:20 PM

Interesting use of this short format. I really enjoyed it. Congratulations on having this haiku featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen