Sigh

Sigh, it is a blur.
I breathe, that’s what I control
Patience, Sun will rise.

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Farah Chamma

Date: 9/1/2010 5:54:00 AM

Great Haiku =) Thought I'd read something you've written a while ago. Farah

Raul Moreno

Date: 5/3/2009 6:51:00 PM

Dima, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/28/2009 6:46:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/24/2009 4:12:00 PM

This was posted before I became active on the site, Dima, but I wanted to check out more of your work. This is magnificent! Love, Carolyn

Michael Jordan

Date: 12/23/2008 8:41:00 PM

D.N. - Congratulations on placing in Seashell’s contest – MERRY CHRISTMAS & God Bless, MJ

Nigel Fawcett

Date: 12/23/2008 12:30:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved Win in seashell's lovely contest. Nigel

John Heck

Date: 12/22/2008 11:28:00 PM

Dear D.N. - Congratulations on your WIN in Island's contest! Peace always, John

Sharon Winter

Date: 12/22/2008 7:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the Winter solstice contest! Well done! Love, shar

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/22/2008 6:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning poem, and for placing in the contest!! ~ Happy Holidays!~Carrie

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/12/2008 6:30:00 AM

This poem captures the moment like a deep breath! Well done!~ Carrie

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/4/2008 6:15:00 PM

This one takes you to that place...sigh! Well done! Congratulations on being featured this week! ~ Carrie

Chitra Lakhera

Date: 11/4/2008 6:53:00 AM

Wonderful vision. Really liked the thought of it. It gives a lot to ponder about. Congratulations on being featured. Love, Chitra

Daver Austin

Date: 11/4/2008 4:18:00 AM

Good moment of thought. Congrats on this choice. Love, daver

Date: 11/3/2008 2:20:00 PM

Interesting use of this short format. I really enjoyed it. Congratulations on having this haiku featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen

Sharon Winter

Date: 11/3/2008 8:26:00 AM

Congratulations on your featured write of the week. Love, Shar

Michael Jordan

Date: 11/3/2008 5:24:00 AM

I reckon it will at that - Congrats on being featured this week - God Bless

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/3/2008 4:34:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poem being featured this week. Love, Carol