Sifting Trees

Sun invades fall leaves
Dividing rays and shadows
Forsaking summer.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 1:31 PM
lOVE IT, Marty, Congratulations
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April 16, 2010 at 10:10 AM
Interesting perspective. Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on your fourth place finish in Raul's contest. Enjoy your success! Keep on writing. Karen
Sweetheart Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 5:09 AM
Congrats Marty on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. an excellent visual of the photo and a well deserved win for u my dear friend..luv.. "Sweetheart"
White Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 3:01 AM
A very real take on the pic- Congrats Marty. I thought the umbrella idea was brilliant also
Moreno Avatar
April 16, 2010 at 1:37 AM
Marty, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul
Dietrich Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 10:15 PM
Very very nice. Great lines, every one! I know you will do well. Anyway, you BETTER.
Kendrick Avatar
April 10, 2010 at 5:41 PM
Great Haiku...It sounds like it would be a good one for the contest...If so ,, Good luck..Sara
A  Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 10:01 PM
ANOTHER GOOD READ . THANK YOU
Mehta Avatar
April 9, 2010 at 9:42 PM
Fine images
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