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Place yourself in my heart and Open your mind. EVENTUALLY you'll realize To open the dark blinds. Revel in INFUSION Yearn for a touch Put away the INEVITABLE Awaken ILLUSION oh so much. Lounge with CREATIVITY Arrive at desire Cancel the cloudiness Edging past the fire. (By Kristen Bruni for Poetry Palace Contest)

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Gautami Phookan

Date: 5/22/2011 8:47:00 AM

Congrats Kristen on your fabulous win in the 'poetry palace' contest...Love, gautami

Tahera Mannan

Date: 5/19/2011 9:12:00 PM

Many congrats Kristen for this win.

Kash Poet

Date: 5/19/2011 6:37:00 PM

Congrats on your win Kristen...enjoyed your poem.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/19/2011 3:53:00 PM

Congratulations on your win with this very creative work..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/19/2011 12:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Linda-Marie's contest Kristen. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2011 9:26:00 AM

Beautifully written, Kristen. Very inspirational. Congratulations on your win in the Poetry Palace contest. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/19/2011 4:29:00 AM

Congatulatins on the second place win in the contest of linda, kristen

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/19/2011 2:47:00 AM

kudos for the glittering win, kristen..;) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/18/2011 9:12:00 PM

Congrats Kristen on your second place win in my contest with this creative write ..thankxx for your constant support luv..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2011 7:46:00 PM

wow, I love how you did this. Maybe it will inspire me to do this one too. Succinct and strong message!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/12/2011 5:35:00 PM

OMG Kristen u are awesome luv.. thankxx for supporting my new contest and this is exquisite ..appreciate the support and hope u had fun creating new poetry .. will read fully upon judging hoping NO more problems..haha..