Side of Salad

my salad rain sprays
on lush fields hamburgers graze
suns’ warm petals blaze
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 3:29 PM
Very creative work in this one.. I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Sara
Roberts Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 11:40 AM
I think your're hungry,great haiku, much enjoyed
Keys Avatar
October 4, 2010 at 10:06 AM
now i am hungry again. you brought sunshine to a burger - and life. great work, thank you, chuck
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