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Sickness

Raging inside me, as if I inhaled the sun I can fell it burning my body Distorting my mind No matter how much I drink, I am always thirsty My body rejects all help I lay here waiting for my torment to end Through it all, a vision of an angel Though I can not see her face I know she is here to save me

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 10/19/2013 11:58:00 PM
Hi Taylor,... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA
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Date: 2/8/2013 5:57:00 AM
I'm enjoying your poem - very well written, Taylor! - Welcome to P-Soup. - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. -Have a nice weekend, hope the sun will shine on you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Taylor Nelson
Date: 2/21/2013 5:35:00 AM
Thank you for the warm welcome, as I write more and find old poems I hope to keep sharing. I hope you have a wonderful year!

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