Taylor Nelson Poet I do not know?

Sickness

Raging inside me, as if I inhaled the sun
I can fell it burning my body
Distorting my mind
No matter how much I drink, I am always thirsty
My body rejects all help
I lay here waiting for my torment to end
Through it all, a vision of an angel
Though I can not see her face
I know she is here to save me

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Poet Destroyer A October 19, 2013 at 11:58 PM Hi Taylor,... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA

Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2013 at 5:57 AM I'm enjoying your poem - very well written, Taylor! - Welcome to P-Soup. - Hope you'll have great pleasure to share your poems here with us. -Have a nice weekend, hope the sun will shine on you. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Taylor Nelson February 21, 2013 at 5:35 AM Thank you for the warm welcome, as I write more and find old poems I hope to keep sharing. I hope you have a wonderful year!