Sick Solitude Andaree

Sick Solitude   Andaree
 
               I felt so sick in the sublime solitude                                  
     Your song of love started with prelude
           I was charmed in great lyric
                 Deeply romantic
                      Not at all
                        Sick
                 Over all
         Seemed supersonic
           Fabulously fantastic
 Interlude concluded in postlude 
  I felt so sick in the sublime solitude.

     Honorable Mention in Contest
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A  Avatar
October 21, 2015 at 9:38 PM
Anisha, Wonderful win.................. SKAT
Allison Avatar
October 18, 2015 at 3:14 PM
like the alliteration in your rhyme congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
October 17, 2015 at 9:16 PM
a very unusual opening line I quite liked that. Thanks for supporting my contest.
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