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Sick Child

A Child Sick With cancer Upset from illness Feeling ugly from the hair loss Depressed feels alienated wants to die because of all Mother feels all the pain isolation of her daughter, she goes into bathroom shaves head

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/11/2009 11:26:00 AM
nice stong and thats what i wish all parents were like
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Date: 12/8/2009 10:12:00 PM
Wow..sad, but somewhat.. strong. -Lynette
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Date: 12/1/2009 6:41:00 PM
This is a tear jerker, but a fine write..thanKs on THE FANCY PREACHER..it is a true story..most of my poems are true stories..reailty with not much dreaming in them,,thanks Danny
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Date: 11/29/2009 7:12:00 PM
yes, heart breaking, yet mother is supporting her child the best way she can.
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Date: 11/28/2009 9:08:00 PM
That's so heartbreaking!
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Date: 11/28/2009 4:51:00 PM
Thanks for introducing me a new style of poetry pretty good write
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