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We're only three and goofy. So our bearer gets angry every single day. We've crossed the line at times. Yet we know we have shoulders to cry. We're only three and noisy. So our home can't be silenced every single day. We've left home to make a fortune and to be attuned. Yet our bearer is waiting to welcome us back home. We're only three and silly. So our memories lingered in any way. We've manage to dwell our different personalities. So our love will remain the same. And I'm the only girl and bratty. So my dramas seemed so absurd to you in any way. But I know counting on you two is easy. That makes me certain to have the best friendsibs forever.

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Date: 2/13/2019 8:20:00 PM
Congratulations. Thanks for sharing your talent. God bless you.
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Lalainne Lang
Date: 2/17/2019 6:47:00 AM
Thank you Beata... God bless you more...
Date: 2/13/2019 2:59:00 PM
Congratulation on winning first place! Well deserved Lalainne!
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Lalainne Lang
Date: 2/17/2019 6:47:00 AM
Thank you Michael, I appreciate your comment.. God Bless..
Date: 2/12/2019 7:42:00 PM
Wow, Lalainne! A trophy poem on your second post. That's incredible. It may be a Poetry Soup record, for all I know. At any rate, congratulations, and welcome to this great poetry website! Best wishes, Gershon Wolf
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Lalainne Lang
Date: 2/17/2019 6:53:00 AM
Thank you Gershon, I appreciate your words and support.. God Bless.
Date: 2/12/2019 3:57:00 PM
This is so sweet Lalainne! Love in every line :))) Congratulations on your top win! xomo
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Lalainne Lang
Date: 2/17/2019 6:55:00 AM
Thank you Maureen, I appreciate your wonderful comment.. God Bless..
Date: 2/12/2019 3:30:00 PM
Congratulations Lalaine!
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Lalainne Lang
Date: 2/17/2019 7:01:00 AM
Thank you Cecelia, no words. Truly appreciate it.. God Bless..
Date: 2/1/2019 10:50:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup. I also have two siblings. A nice poem for your first "share".
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Lalainne Lang
Date: 2/2/2019 1:51:00 PM
Thank you Caren.. hope to share more.

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