Shut-Down City

On asphalt, wet with blood and sweat (down streets with no address), 
there lay a man, snuffed by the Man and left to evanesce.
The Man then strode along the road and smiled at his success
and, cavalier, he bought a beer, sat down to decompress.

A life was gone, but day wore on, the sun awash in heat –
the riddled head no longer bled, concealed beneath a sheet,
and passers-by began to cry, were sobbing indiscreet’,
while holy bells in distant hells began to moan and bleat.

In heaven's eyes (no one denies) due process is decreed,
but down below, where burdens flow, it rarely can succeed
and certainly not for those distraught, benighted in their need,
so Men in blue (you know the crew) thought nothing of the deed.

Though just eighteen, a little green (was still his mama's son!),
adored by all, but left to sprawl in webs of hate, undone,
the youth was shot and left to rot, but never held a gun,
so people cried and wondered why'd the evil deed been done.

The sheriff said "forget the dead, his crime was black as slate" 
and in the rush to hush and shush, he hissed "I'll tell you straight,
that boy, today, was on his way to rendezvous with fate,
so now you know – I gotta go, it's gettin' kinda late".

Not satisfied with those who'd lied, some took to fill the streets
with peaceful cries neath blackened skies, were paid with clubbed retreats,
cruel gas cascades and stun grenades, then days in jailhouse suites –
though curfew's on from dusk till dawn, each night this scene repeats.

With exits barred, in came the Guard to rumble and repress,
for people stray both night and day in search of some redress.
The city's scarred, the houses charred, the locals in distress –
with cut or bruise, they still refuse to kneel or acquiesce.

So choppers fly above the sky with whirling, twirling blades
and drones in flight within the night erase the renegades.
The tarot cards and crystal shards reveal the masquerades –
the beating parts of diamonds’ hearts forever club the spades.

Now puppet Pols are making calls and acting out charades
(like shouting loud within the crowd, and marching in parades),
while underneath, where lies a wreath, the hope for justice fades.
Yet, freedom waits behind the gates, beyond the barricades.

25 Aug 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Kearley Avatar
September 19, 2014 at 3:18 PM
Oh, you gave me chills with this one. A fine dedication.
O'Leary Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 1:54 PM
Thank you, Dan... It's a chilling situation... I'm happy I could reflect the chills...
Corbin Avatar
September 12, 2014 at 11:00 AM
Really, really excellent write Terry. Perfect rhymes, and powerful story flow. I only wish someone would write about the dozens of murders that go unheeded in Chicago and other cities on a daily basis.
O'Leary Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 1:55 PM
Thank you, Jim... There is so much injustice in the world, it's hard to know where to start!!
Walker  Avatar
September 4, 2014 at 2:33 AM
A super-awesome write Terry rated and enjoyed. Verlena
O'Leary Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 9:15 AM
Thank you for your kind words, Verlena! I'm happy you enjoyed... Terry
Nair Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 7:14 PM
It was such a pleasure reading you after a long time, congrats,Terry.
O'Leary Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 9:14 AM
Thank you very much! (I don't have too much time at the present for writing stuff...)
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August 31, 2014 at 12:53 PM
Dear Terry, I wish your poem would be printed for all to see. What a wonderful writing style you employ to convey feelings about this tragedy. Justice seems to sleep in Missouri, but many of us are outraged. And how true it is the politicians seize every chance to "parade" and gain public favor. A very powerful poem, Terry! It goes to my faves. Thank you for your kind comment on my Native American poem. Love and blessings, Carolyn
O'Leary Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 9:12 AM
I didn't know John had participated... I'll have to send a few words of praise...
O'Leary Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 9:09 AM
Thank you, Carolyn!!! Unfortunately too many in humane/inhuman things like this happen in the 'Land of the Free', going back to the Native Americans, to the present, and (incomprehensibly) probably into the (distant?) future... And not only 'here', but (everywhere??) elsewhere, and not only in the 'recent' past, but even before... Loive, Terry
Devonshire Avatar
August 31, 2014 at 12:54 PM
By the way, Soup member John Loving was among those who marched to show support for the grieving family.
A. Sharma Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 8:51 AM
I m extremely sorry for the typo error in ur name Terry !
O'Leary Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 9:03 AM
No need for apologies!!! I've been called worse... ;-)) Terry
A. Sharma Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 8:50 AM
Awesome write Teddy! A deserved rhythmic winner, subject chosen is fabulous, reminds of the movie enemy at the gates! Congrats on huge win!
O'Leary Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 9:01 AM
Thank you, Upma... I'm glad you liked it... Terry
Gibson Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:04 PM
Very well written, Terry; you gave us all a gripping picture of your perspective. Congratulations.
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September 9, 2014 at 9:00 AM
Thank you, Faye... I'm happy you were 'gripped'... ;-)) Terry
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August 29, 2014 at 7:00 PM
I'm not always a fan of rhyme, but when it's done as well as this I really appreciate it, and not only end rhyme but internal rhyme, too! it's an impressive, hard hitting poem, with great flow - congrats on your win in my contest :)
O'Leary Avatar
September 9, 2014 at 8:58 AM
Thank you, Charlotte, for your winning placement of my work! And thanks also for your kind words... Terry
Richards Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 6:37 PM
Hi Terry, what an intense poem, dark with description. I do believe you could write a novel.......but somehow this is so true to life, I can't help but wonder if it is based on a true event? You took us there! Well done!
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September 9, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Thank you, Carrie... yes, "it is based on a true event"... sadly :-(( Terry
Bauer Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 8:33 PM
a brilliant poem, terry, with some killer internal rhyme. i am truly impressed by your skills as evidenced in this really amazing piece of writing...
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August 27, 2014 at 1:40 PM
Thank you, Ilene! Your kind words are very flattering... lovin' it--- Terry
Corbin Avatar
August 25, 2014 at 9:53 AM
This is very powerful and very well written. You have a very good sense of quality rhyme, and an excellent presentation for your message. Very nice. Jim
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September 9, 2014 at 8:52 AM
Thank you, Jim... I'm happy the message is understood... Terry
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