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Shut Out

The truth I see in your eyes Deep down in your soul The truth you don't show anyone Not even me The anger that fills up inside you I don't understand It explodes at me with all its might It hurts it crushes it takes a piece of me I wish you'd let me in Instead you shut me out

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Skat A

Date: 5/6/2016 1:55:00 AM

KRISTA, this is an awesome poem, thank you for sharing. ** SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2016 11:58:00 AM

Krista, nicely penned. Glad to read your poem today. Luv ~LINDA~

Trinity Biles

Date: 11/13/2014 3:08:00 PM

I love that the way this is written, really can explain to other people what it's like to be in an abusive situation. How you want to stay because you care. Well done. -TJ

Krista Coleman
Date: 2/26/2016 6:29:00 AM

No i am not in a abusive relationship at the time my husband an I were upset with each other an its how I felt at the time an thankx for the comment :)

David Meade

Date: 11/13/2014 2:59:00 PM

Some people have a difficulty of expressing themselves -- sometimes they don't even know exactly what they are feeling . . . here is one suggestion -- pick something you both like doing . . . enjoy the task, event, the togetherness then slowly let conversation develop. I am assuming this is not physical violence -- if it is -- get safe, now!

Krista Coleman
Date: 2/26/2016 6:27:00 AM

No i am not in a abusive relationship at the time my husband an I were upset with each other an its how I felt at the time