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Shudders In Echoes

~ “I'd never known her to cry” Her smile that warms every heart that it touches Springtime and daisies, blue morning skies “but this time is different for sure” As rivers stop flowing neath cloud altered whispers set off in regrets of sorrow filled cries “she's shaking with tears in her eyes” Knees meeting soil her face now she’s hiding shudders in echoes of pain she does know “as she picks up what’s left of the night” In moon beam intentions now star lit and lonely I hold her in comfort so my love does show

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/30/2019 2:52:00 AM
Quite a lovely poem ! Enjoyed it so very much! Thanks for the share!
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Date: 10/26/2019 1:43:00 PM
Lovely done. I really like the structure, plied with finesse. xomo
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Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2019 8:01:00 AM
I appreciate you Maureen.
Date: 10/25/2019 7:01:00 PM
Tender expression, my friend...
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Chris Green
Date: 10/28/2019 8:01:00 AM
Thank you so much HT. You are too kind to me.
Date: 10/25/2019 3:45:00 PM
It is a wise man who knows when a woman just needs to be held. Your sensitivity emerges so gracefully in this gentle, comforting poem, Chris. A fave for me! Hugs, Carolyn
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2019 4:10:00 PM
Thank you so very much Carolyn. I appreciate your nice thoughts on this.
Date: 10/25/2019 3:43:00 PM
This is gorgeous ...wow... you finally left me speechless with one of your writes ... hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2019 4:10:00 PM
Thank you Sandy for all of the kindness you show me.
Date: 10/25/2019 3:31:00 PM
Awesome form, Chris. Thanks for sharing.
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2019 4:09:00 PM
Thank you so very much Line
Date: 10/25/2019 3:23:00 PM
Wow this is beautiful Chris. A caring, loving poem. Very nice :)
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Chris Green
Date: 10/25/2019 4:09:00 PM
Thank you so much Heidi. Just something that came to mind that I felt needed to be posted today, though Fridays around here are usually pretty slow.

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