Patri Venkata Ramana Poet Verse

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SEVEN BY SEVEN Poetry Contest - Verse Form

Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud

Date: 10-04-2026

SHROUD OF DUSK

Day's drama comes to a drop
Deep blinds disseminated
Disclosing the doors of dusk
Deathly deafness developed
Darkness deters and dwindles
Discomfort and drudgery
Downtime for an endless deal

Place : 4

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Ghairo Daniels April 20, 2026 at 2:39 AM Love the D alliterations ~ feels like a strong march. Well done in contest, Patri. Sending blessings. Patri Venkata Ramana April 22, 2026 at 3:12 AM Thank you so much for reading and appreciating my lines.

Andrea Dietrich April 19, 2026 at 9:55 AM It's cool how this resembles a plieades poem except for syllable count. Well thought out! Congrats to you Patri Venkata Ramana April 19, 2026 at 9:38 PM Thank you so much for appreciating my lines.

Hilda Greenhough April 14, 2026 at 9:59 PM This is an ideal seven by seven. I enjoyed how you kept meter with the steady D repeats. Patri Venkata Ramana April 15, 2026 at 12:09 AM Thank you so much for appreciating my lines