Shroud

fog and mist shroud the island of my birth ~ a soft cool veil

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/15/2024 1:04:00 AM

I was teasing of course! Love Newfoundland!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 9/13/2024 10:39:00 PM

Nice, makes me think of a song "Farewell to Nova Scotia"

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/15/2024 1:03:00 AM

I will and come on Farewell to Nova Scotia means the boat was sailing to a better place called Newfoundland!!!! :) Cheers

Jim Healey
Date: 9/14/2024 1:53:00 AM

Ah, but the monoku is about Newfoundland! Please look up a song called “Saltwater Joys”. It is a song very near and dear to the hearts of Newfoundlanders. Glad you enjoyed the poem.