Shredded Life

Your silence only 
ampliphies the lies
And keeps problems and 
doubts well fed
Comfort and trust
quickly sicken and die
What's left is a shell of a 
memory
a life 
Shreds of things we've 
built together
Float through the still, stale 
air
of betrayal
a desolate place where 
decisions are hard
and consequences seem 
heavier
than the mistakes that 
gave birth to them
In these periodic moments 
of paralyzing sadness
I consider jumping off 
the side of this island
Into the unknown
with nothing but a leaky 
raft
of pain, broken oars to 
guide myself further into 
solitude and the leftover 
vows we couldn't keep
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Chakrabarty Avatar
September 20, 2012 at 4:38 PM
Awesome!
Falgout Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 10:02 PM
Heartfelt poem written here, congrats on your feature, love debra
Michelle Avatar
September 19, 2012 at 9:39 PM
Congrats with your feature, another amazing poem!!! Such talent.
A   Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 2:03 PM
ZAIDA, congratulations with your awesome featured poem of the week... enjoy your day :-) PD
Wellington Avatar
September 16, 2012 at 9:33 PM
Zaida, may I quote your words from this poem to someone? These words are exactly the ones I wish to use, but wasn't able to eloquently bring them to the surface as you have done. I don't want to just steal them. Not when you have done your justice to them. So, may I quote them, please? This is in the realm of majestic poetry. One love. Joy Wells
Ruiz Avatar
September 17, 2012 at 6:09 AM
Hi Joy! Thank you for your very kind words and encouragement. Yes, you may quote me and thank you for asking. I would be honored.
Loving Iii Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 5:04 PM
Ill fav this one.
Loving Iii Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 4:51 PM
Only the spirit of truth writes this eliquently.
Fox Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 2:35 PM
A crackin write of felt poetry !
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