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To great applause, I walk the rope - I’ll stay upon my feet, I hope; I look below and see no net - And smile (although my brow is wet). I juggle, dance and skip, recalling painful falls; Then ride a bike and sing My Way…to great applause. On the trapeze, I seem to fly, The ground beneath me whooshes by, I catch my partner by her feet, Perspiring madly with the heat, I somersault and spin - the effort makes me wheeze; The show is done, I take a bow…on the trapeze. For David’s Circus contest Using the Wrapped Refrain, a form created by Jan Turner

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Date: 6/11/2012 5:00:00 AM
This is great... I really enjoyed it. Nice to get such a blessing in such a beautiful monday afternoon.
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Date: 5/19/2012 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in David's "Circus" contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/19/2012 4:17:00 AM
A 'moving' poem... and congrats... Terry
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Date: 5/19/2012 3:32:00 AM
Jack congrats on your win, scary moment here..David
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Date: 5/2/2012 12:19:00 AM
wow, my admiration of you grows and grows when I see you using these created poetry forms. This is really nice. Jan will be so proud. I ought to copy this to show her! Yes, I think I will!!!
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Date: 5/2/2012 12:19:00 AM
I think you should score high in the contest with this one!
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Date: 4/29/2012 2:53:00 PM
Jack, awee... lovely guts in this image.. I'm gonna go buy my ticket... I really want to see you fly on them trapeze... good luck in the contest...always..pd
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Date: 4/29/2012 2:04:00 PM
This is a lovely display of a circus my friend! I rather love this wonderfully incredible write that you have written! I really enjoyed your poem that I have read this afternoon! Great Work!!
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Date: 4/29/2012 2:03:00 PM
I really enjoyed this one, Jack..I could see you up there on that wire with the audience going oooooouuh and ahhhhh....Good luck in the contest...Reads like a winner...Sara
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Date: 4/29/2012 1:19:00 PM
Great poem that should do very well in the contest ...Samia
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Date: 4/29/2012 12:40:00 PM
Jack, our poems for this contest are so similar. I guess lots of us dreamed of walking the high wire. Best wishes in David's contest! (So glad you caught your partner -- no net could have meant splat.) Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/29/2012 12:19:00 PM
Great write Jack!! I can just visualize this Showman!!.. Love Diana
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Date: 4/29/2012 11:32:00 AM
Smile ˜ Such amazing athletes these precious lives whom have chosen such a career to entertain their fellow companions amid this thing we call life ˜ Very admirable these lovely lights * My love to You, John!:) ˜
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