Show Me the Anger

(thud thud) (thud thud) (thudthud ..... thud)
my mind is dirty and covered in mud
eyes so red theyre pouring blood
no bandaids, i just bleed
my hands convulse and rage fills me
heart beating erradically
everyones so mad at me
and you keep sayin things so dramatically 
dissin everyone that ever loved me
callin me ugly
im just walkin and you like to nudge me
well now its your turn, im standing here and im not budging
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 7:34 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Show Me The Anger" contest Dustin. Love, Carol
Ramage Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 12:33 AM
Well done Dustin. Congratulations on the win. Lee
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 9:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!====Lori
Sweetheart Avatar
October 2, 2011 at 6:54 PM
Congrats Dustin on a wonderful second place win with this excellent expression of emotion luv..
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