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Shout On Top of the Mountain

A-fter the evening has turned I-nto a fresh new dawn; Z-enith is ready to brighten Y-our birthday celebration. A-fter the shadow has faded, L-osing its deep darkness; Z-eal of the morn is felt, U-ntil it clears the early mist. L-onely night is over, the sun slowly starts to shine; A-nother momentous event is waiting next in line. A-fter the haze has vanished, V-iew is now amazing; E-rase the gray clouds, L-et them leave the morning. L-earn to conquer your fear, A-s well as your doubt; N-avigate the stretch of hills, O-n top of the mountain, shout!

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Date: 12/29/2016 6:37:00 PM
Nice one Bernard! I like the ending too.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 12/29/2016 6:54:00 PM
Thanks, Heidi+++++++++++++ HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!!!!!
Date: 12/29/2016 6:28:00 PM
Hello again, this is another beautiful written poem. I enjoyed it.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
Date: 12/29/2016 6:53:00 PM
Hi Darlene..... Thanks for the comment.... I'll gladly keep it in my heart+++++++++++

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