Should I Eat Or Kiss

vanilla flavoured
icecream in between your lips.....
should I eat or kiss


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Placement:7th;(October 2011)

Contest:Neapolitan Icecream (haiku)

Sponsor:Irma Linda.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Wesley Avatar
October 9, 2011 at 11:08 PM
Sounds like you'll get both Kash - go for it!
Sweetheart Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 12:02 PM
kiss...kiss...kiss...
Brown Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 8:12 AM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s "Neapolitan Ice Cream (Haiku)" contest Kash. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 7, 2011 at 12:51 AM
Congrats Kash on a top ten win with this yummy sweet treat luv.. like the new moniker u chose my friend...
Haick Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 11:06 PM
: ) Congratulations on fine win in the contest, Kash! Delightful. Love, Annalise
Ramage Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 10:48 PM
Oh, I love food,but alway go for the kiss. well done, Congrats. Lee
Foster Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 9:42 PM
just close your eyes and go with the flow....good one Kash cheers Margaret
Wesley Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 4:58 PM
Food for the mind, a kiss for the soul. What else do we need? Lovely my friend.
Devonshire Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 1:35 PM
Just a kiss to share the bliss! Love this haiku, Kash. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
A   Avatar
October 6, 2011 at 11:57 AM
DEAR KASH ~.. CONGRATULATIONS,, FOR YOUR WONDERFUL AND SWEET ENTRY... GOD BLESS YOU,..ALWAYS,..P.D.
Fiery Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 2:14 PM
very very sensuous question at the end...kashi you hve really givenn rich flavour to ur haiku...
Brown Avatar
October 5, 2011 at 7:29 AM
I enjoyed reading your exciting poetry this morning Kashinath. The best to you in the contest. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 5:58 PM
Food and sex....inseparable! Haiku fever, huh? Enjoyed....u must have a whole fan club of female poets by now! (Read below......) :)
Onclaud Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 1:36 PM
wowow, sexy!! :0 winning wishes, you devil!! :) huggs, nette
Osita Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 10:37 AM
Such a lovely haiku from you, Kash. Have a nice day
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 9:36 AM
Hmm, maybe you should say, Lick or kiss!!!
Dietrich Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 9:35 AM
VERY clever, Kash. and cute one!!
A   Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 9:05 AM
Good morning Kash,, how are you this wonderful morning? As for me just great.... heheh! I think Ice cream and waffle's sounds like a good deal... I think I will eat and see what MY cook has for em,, enjoyed and thank you for the support,..P.D,..
A   Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 9:09 AM
me.. not em.... but, em does sound good,, ;-)
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