Should I

Should I compare your face to a thousand gleaming suns,
Or should I just say that you are cheerful and fun?
Should I like the way you're gentle and mild,
Or should I search the meaning of beauty in the book confiled?
Should I make your heart be filled with pleasure,
And make your life free without any preassure?
Should I know that you love me cause I don't  have a clue?
Cause you always cheer me up and you alone let my life push on through.
Should I know that you will remain loyal to me? 
Cause I can't stand living without you, my heart won't be free.

Should I cherish the part where you have smooth hair,
Or should I know that loving you is just very rare?
Should I look and stare at those lovingful eyes,
Or should I notice, when you pass by, all the plants seems to rise?
Should I remember the day when we had this relation,
Or should I just say that my love for you is greater than anything in any nation?
Should I devote my love and care just for you?
Cause I don't want this relation to be as simple as a brew.
Should I know that you will love me more than ever?
Cause I want my love to always be with you forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2006


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