Bryn Strudwick Poet Verse

Should I

SHOULD I?

When
I saw
her
In the
morning sun,
I knew
I
had to
introduce
myself to her.
Was I too
forward
to
believe
she might feel
the same?
Yes
she just
laughed

16th June 2021
Waltz Wave poetry Contest
Sponsor - Kim Merryman

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Unseeking Seeker June 26, 2021 at 7:59 PM Laughter is a great way to begin … dreams, as they soon blossom! Great write and congrats on your win, Bryn

Kim Merryman June 26, 2021 at 3:06 PM Bryn, this is a great waltz wave! Congrats on your win in my contest! Blessings, Kim M

Andrea Dietrich June 24, 2021 at 5:53 PM awwww, she laughed, dang it. Hey, this is GREAT. Congrats on the win

Rama Balasubramanian June 17, 2021 at 4:01 AM Good one! Wonderful entry for contest. All the best. You are brave!