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Shortfalls on the Long-Haul

In long-haul dreams, we set our sights far-off on distant shores,
Assuming that each step, each choice, each twist, will open doors,
Will keep us heading steadfastly ahead, right on course!
Yet time reveals the dead-weight drag of our remorse.
Looking back on the shortfalls, on the litter of regrets stowed
As keepsakes to repay, all the time-wasters, for ransom owed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 4:07 PM
Hello John Anderson, Well siid. Enjoy your evening. my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 11:25 AM
Hello John, well said. Thank you i will have fun. enjoy your day my friend. /Darlene/
Anderson Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 5:03 PM
Thanks very much for your response. have fun!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 2:16 PM
You’ve spoken truth. Looking back we find out where we fell short but still just like children crawl, fall, walk, so do we. Love: Yet time reveals the dead-weight drag of our remorse.
Anderson Avatar
September 21, 2024 at 5:03 PM
Thanks so much, Cheers and Best Wishes
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