Short Time On the Porch

As the crickets sing flooding, saturating my being__enveloped I am in sound and moist 
air..In the sky ballet figure dances dressed in very tight white leotard bounding across 
the stage, leaping into mid-air with a whole troop dressed in pink pastel costumes on 
back of the stage..The music crescendos swellinng to the final jump then the sun's tip 
comes up over the horizon..Life moves on and the day's work begins..Grateful I am for the 
few minutes on the porch..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Galua Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 7:03 PM
I'm glad there are still people left to appreciate beauty amidst the constraint of every day life...love it! ^_^ v
Sweetheart Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 12:05 PM
I just luv my front porch too Sara.. and u made yours come alive with imagery and sounds.. enjoyed.. my contest entry "Illuminated Illusions" is now ready to be read... thankxxx for checking it out before.. with luv..
Culverhouse Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 11:33 AM
enjoyed!! Robbie wants some dressing...I guess I will take him some if that is ok.
Neels Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 7:04 AM
I enjoyed sitting with you on the porch Sara, its like a pick me up to start the day, bb Wilma
Horsman Avatar
July 26, 2010 at 6:25 AM
wow that will take so beating, the execise that is. excellent poem enjoyed the read. Harry
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