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Shopoholic

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Shopoholic

		                                 Flaunt
                                                ..-ing....
                                            .  ...Gucci...
               . ________             ... bag......
         ..        ..               striding on heels, ...
       ..          ...    --------     glitters of chanel
      ................                     and puff of Dunhill,
      ................                        that     glamorous
      ....Shop ...                          green scarf..     ....
      ....-o-  .....                          & swarovski     ....
       ....holic ..                         rock,  Give        me 
        ............                       a reason why,  why
           .......                       I shouldn't shop 
                                        at shopper's stop.
                                       ..Killer         Jeans are...
                                     .........              . tempting
                                   and so                     are demin 
                                  shrugs,                          ..satin..             
                                tunics,                               ....on a  
                              spree.                                  unplugged,
                            charms                                   of a.......
                           genie..                                     beckons 
                        through                                      black....                       
                        harems                                       bills soar 
                       high.....                                        depleting 
                      balance.                                       .............

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Date: 6/19/2011 1:59:00 PM
This is a neat little shape here. I've done a shape poem once, but no where near this creative! You have an amazing poem here!-AddieThornton
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Date: 3/6/2011 2:01:00 PM
A beautiful layout with nice expressions, Rajlakshmi
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Date: 3/6/2011 3:15:00 AM
This is really cool!...love,Deb
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