Shoplifting Fireworks

shoplifting fireworks - the red-white-blue prison stripes of good citizens

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 6/14/2023 1:29:00 AM

A great haiku. Shoplifting fireworks can be dangerous.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 2:01:00 AM

Oh yes!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/13/2023 8:18:00 PM

I know this has Nothing to dO with fireworks but witH a WEAPONIZED FEDERAL GOVERNMENT that slams citizens in jail for no reason. Also killed an American Marine on January 6 in the Capitol..She was not violent. Local news channels, fake news despie goodness.SO make good people evil and evil people good. You know exactly what I mean. We are not involved with mandates or censorship are being slammed in jail for speaking out.. Criminals get out of jail free., great poem Kim Pangie xx

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/14/2023 2:02:00 AM

Such a strange turn of events for our country!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/13/2023 3:25:00 PM

With eloquent precision, KIM, you crafted a haiku that captures the disturbing reality of shoplifting fireworks. The resulting punishment of red-white-blue prison stripes is a stark contrast to the image of good citizens.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2023 4:07:00 PM

Thank you, Lasaad! In the U.S. people are being allowed to walk out with goods in certain parts of the country…whereas good citizens suffer.

Paige Hind

Date: 6/13/2023 1:25:00 PM

Hey, this is very clever! Well done!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2023 4:07:00 PM

Thanks, Paige!

Michael Tor

Date: 6/13/2023 8:38:00 AM

We need more of them Kim. Thanks for sharing...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/13/2023 11:51:00 AM

The good citizens need a get out of jail card…return our country to its glory. Thank you, Michael!