Anthony Dover Poet I do not know?

Shooting Stars

I watch worlds pass by ,
Transcience of me,
I blink and find myself in a better future,
Dream people I walk through,
Who try to control me,
I ignore evil as of no consequence,
And talk to no-one as best defence,
I shoot fast ';bang bang your dead';
And hold onto nothing,
For dear life.

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Tyler Jones September 14, 2010 at 7:51 AM Sounds like a science fiction kind of thing, otherwise it doesn't really make sense to me, and I can't really find a flow. I still think you used good imagination

Jessica Arteaga September 13, 2010 at 7:59 PM hmm i hold on to nothing, for dear life: don't hold to others to you could guide yourslef through? don't get quite the meaning but i enjoy that line very much, good poem