Notes About The Poem

Written in my form (Yalto)

Shooting Stars

Endlessly
     captivating.
          I mean...

the shooting stars
     darting across the... 
          blackboard sky

Stunning
     Magical
          I love...

watching it 
     in motion 
          with childlike wonder, 

with such rapt attention
     So...
          few and far between!


(Yalto)

Shooting Stars Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Nayda Ivette Negron
Date written and submitted: 08/17/2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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August 19, 2019 at 5:44 PM
Stars always inspire us to write... nice one Edward
Ibeh Avatar
August 19, 2019 at 6:12 PM
Thank you, SO:-)
Rodrigues Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 6:56 PM
A joy to read!
Ibeh Avatar
August 17, 2019 at 8:40 PM
Thank you, Kim:-)
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