Notes About The Poem
For Brian Strand's ' Your Choice 'h' Poetry Contest. 16 May 2025

shooting star hiku




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                    *        s l o w
                      *    s p i r a l
                *    h u m    t h r e a d s
           *    t h r o u g h   b o n e
              *   o f   c o m e t    t a i l
                  *    t h e n   f a l l s
                *      i n t o  h u s h
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Rodrigues Avatar
August 11, 2025 at 4:56 PM
Cool!
Kendrick Avatar
May 18, 2025 at 4:09 PM
Congratulations on your creative winning work. Way to go. Sara K
Goldsmith Avatar
May 17, 2025 at 10:15 AM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a lovely day writing away..........
Dietrich Avatar
May 16, 2025 at 11:58 PM
Ohhh NICE!
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