Shooting Star

Glittering silver
shooting star arches the sky
disappearing fast
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Mcdaid Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 1:09 PM
very beautifully put linda
Johnson-Saunders Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 12:45 PM
A beautiful image, Shadow! Love and blessings, Rhonda
Tacito Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 10:14 AM
I love shooting stars. Excellently done! =D
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 8:36 AM
yes, that is a great way to show the shooting star!
Hamilton Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 8:49 AM
catch a falling star and put it in your pocket how wonderful Ty Andrea for reading Shadow x smile
Lamoureux Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 8:14 AM
You shine like a shooting star with staying power.
Hamilton Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 8:18 AM
hi Richard and Ty dear lol soup mail Shadow x smile hugs
Mehta Avatar
October 21, 2013 at 10:37 PM
Lovely picture of the shooting star, Shadow
Hamilton Avatar
October 22, 2013 at 5:50 AM
hi Richard they are beautiful Ty Shadow x smile
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