Shooting Star

A wayward star has lost it's place
Amidst the vastness known as space
Too close to earth it's path did lead
This shooting star for us to see
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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November 25, 2011 at 11:08 PM
Daniel, , first things first~ How was your thanksgiving? I hope fine! About this poem: a very lovley poem... thank you for sharing...p.d.
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November 25, 2011 at 5:49 AM
I like the subject, and what you are saying, was let down by that last dodgy rhyme, nice try
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