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Shooting Star

A wayward star has lost it's place Amidst the vastness known as space Too close to earth it's path did lead This shooting star for us to see

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/25/2011 11:08:00 PM
Daniel, , first things first~ How was your thanksgiving? I hope fine! About this poem: a very lovley poem... thank you for sharing...p.d.
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Date: 11/25/2011 5:49:00 AM
I like the subject, and what you are saying, was let down by that last dodgy rhyme, nice try
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