Shoebox Universe

Written: April 30th, 2026, for contest sponsored by: Nette Onclaud 2nd place contest winner ************ Below my childhood bed was a shoebox, Its board spine is humming its lies mocks. It held a map of purloined time, pulled by a moth who dreamed in silver rhyme. Night, it opened gates in the dust, urging stars to stray in its trust. And every dawn it closed with quiet grace— a tiny universe in one small space.
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Dietrich Avatar
May 9, 2026 at 3:38 PM
Wow that second part was super poetic. Nicely done. Congrats
Goldsmith Avatar
May 1, 2026 at 1:58 PM
WOW!!! I enjoyed reading this creative write/story. Great Ending... "Good Luck" I also did this fun contest. Have a great day/weekend writing away...........
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April 30, 2026 at 9:52 PM
Magnificent. I can picture the magic leaving the shoebox at night. A place far away and another universe, it would be a child's adventure.
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