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Shockwaves

There was no stillness in the air that night, a summer night filled with young love fueled with passion and ruled by intensity, eyes locked on each other and hot breath releasing fire from within, two bodies crashing endlessly in the darkness finding our own rhythm lusting over our own song - a young love ballad for the ages but forgotten all too soon, older eyes and older mind still remember that time, still sing that dusty song, still lust for more... but still is always the night. 03/16/2017 Word Count: 87

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Date: 3/30/2017 8:25:00 AM
George, your last line makes the poem, very nicely done.
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George Aul
Date: 3/31/2017 9:56:00 AM
Thank you for the nice comment........ George
Date: 3/16/2017 7:40:00 PM
WOW! Congrats on your placement with this poem about HOT memories! Janice
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George Aul
Date: 3/17/2017 10:44:00 AM
Thank you for the comment - hope the memories last a long time.............. George
Date: 3/16/2017 6:57:00 PM
wow, this poem gave me shockwaves! beautiful and magical- remarkably wonderful in every possible way...thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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George Aul
Date: 3/17/2017 10:42:00 AM
Thanks for sponsoring the contest and for the great comment.......... George
Date: 3/16/2017 12:35:00 PM
Gorgeous write!
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George Aul
Date: 3/16/2017 4:59:00 PM
Thank you for reading and enjoying............. George

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