Shockwaves

There was no stillness in the air that night,
a summer night filled with young love
fueled with passion and ruled by intensity,
eyes locked on each other
and hot breath releasing fire from within,
two bodies crashing endlessly in the darkness
finding our own rhythm
lusting over our own song -
a young love ballad for the ages
but forgotten all too soon,
older eyes and older mind
still remember that time,
still sing that dusty song,
still lust for more...
but still is always the night.

03/16/2017 
Word Count: 87
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Inman Avatar
March 30, 2017 at 8:25 AM
George, your last line makes the poem, very nicely done.
Aul Avatar
March 31, 2017 at 9:56 AM
Thank you for the nice comment........ George
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March 16, 2017 at 7:40 PM
WOW! Congrats on your placement with this poem about HOT memories! Janice
Aul Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 10:44 AM
Thank you for the comment - hope the memories last a long time.............. George
Scars Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 6:57 PM
wow, this poem gave me shockwaves! beautiful and magical- remarkably wonderful in every possible way...thank you and congrats :)-luloo
Aul Avatar
March 17, 2017 at 10:42 AM
Thanks for sponsoring the contest and for the great comment.......... George
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March 16, 2017 at 12:35 PM
Gorgeous write!
Aul Avatar
March 16, 2017 at 4:59 PM
Thank you for reading and enjoying............. George
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